Attached is the edited version I have after the critique session, just a couple of feedback from my classmates:-
1) The 2 logos in the middle of the poster is rather distracting - I kinda agree with it because I don't really know how to label it when I place it all the way at the bottom along with other logos, but after a while I thought maybe it wasn't exactly necessary afterall, so I moved it down!
2) Many didn't get the pun about 18 and 80, until I explained to them. So they suggested that I should write 80 and have a strike against it, and put a 18 there so they would better understand.
But just that I'm still wondering if the use of red would be appropriate, because it appears to be rather striking, comments anyone?
3) Someone mentioned about 79 reaching 80, because "reaching" feels further than "going", but I kinda don't agree? Just thought that "reaching" wouldn't be as visually appealing as "going", partially because I thought the word is shorter.
I've added "on" to make it "going on" though, just like the song "I am sixteen going on seventeen" song, comments?
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